tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8236074268635113203.post5461634602623320397..comments2023-04-24T18:23:40.459-07:00Comments on Fast Track GED: What Score Would You Give This Essay?Adam Nathansonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02145778709100575601noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8236074268635113203.post-62129672447388290062011-06-16T13:34:29.872-07:002011-06-16T13:34:29.872-07:00That was really interesting, fascinating informati...That was really interesting, fascinating information. I’ve also found this website to be useful <a href="http://www.Highschooldiplomaonlinefree.com/" rel="nofollow">HIGH SCHOOL DIPLOMA ONLINE</a>shawnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03919279099099724660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8236074268635113203.post-89149865303651279642008-07-24T08:51:00.000-07:002008-07-24T08:51:00.000-07:00thank you very much Mr.Adam for your time. This is...thank you very much Mr.Adam for your time. This is a Veneravenerahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00173614899907186192noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8236074268635113203.post-91818520286781348472008-01-31T07:48:00.000-08:002008-01-31T07:48:00.000-08:00Hello All,Thanks for commenting here. I agree, I ...Hello All,<BR/>Thanks for commenting here. I agree, I set up this essay to see if you would pick up on several things. First, many of you noticed that I did NOT stay on topic, but rather wrote about the opposite of the topic. That's a very common student error on the GED essay. Second, some of you did note the grammar, word choice, and organization were actually pretty well thought out. Those qualities probably would have saved this piece of writing from failing the test with a score of 1 (no score).Adam Nathansonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02917401445459447855noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8236074268635113203.post-12412658577711511902008-01-29T16:41:00.000-08:002008-01-29T16:41:00.000-08:00You didn't give a goal that you wanted to achieve ...You didn't give a goal that you wanted to achieve in the next few years. You gave us unsuccessful stuff you tried to do in the past, but no future plans.Lawrence Robinsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376638377836871943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8236074268635113203.post-34304167917465008012008-01-29T16:33:00.000-08:002008-01-29T16:33:00.000-08:00okay i think you would get a 2 because you did use...okay i think you would get a 2 because you did use correct grammar and spelling i do understand what you are saying about your goals but you didnt stick to the topic all you did was made excuses why you didnt accomplish the three goalstinknaunteehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04998822330059369134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8236074268635113203.post-87358987881428128272008-01-29T16:04:00.000-08:002008-01-29T16:04:00.000-08:00Adam I think you deserve a 2 on yout essay.You lis...Adam I think you deserve a 2 on yout essay.You listed goals that you didnt accomplish in the past but,you didnt stick to the topic of the essay.I coulnd't get an idea about what goals that you want to accomplish in the next few years.Mr.Hundred Roundshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14986255374808333497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8236074268635113203.post-17570022991848046672008-01-29T15:51:00.000-08:002008-01-29T15:51:00.000-08:00Adam, I think that this essay is clearly focused o...Adam, I think that this essay is clearly focused on the main idea, the grammar of the writter is correct, and you also have a varity of words that expresses themselfCorie Gandyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00244632353016930075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8236074268635113203.post-81087344598130327472008-01-29T15:47:00.000-08:002008-01-29T15:47:00.000-08:00my comments about this whole topic of this essay i...my comments about this whole topic of this essay is that it had alot of details bout the goals that he want to acomplish but seems like it will never happen with all the bad luck thats been going on and feel like the writer deserve a 3 it was really adequate and i understand how he feels about bad luckUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12794647151847000949noreply@blogger.com