tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8236074268635113203.post9108202257453632024..comments2023-04-24T18:23:40.459-07:00Comments on Fast Track GED: Tuesday, November 27 AssignmentsAdam Nathansonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02145778709100575601noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8236074268635113203.post-32423049433069144552007-11-29T15:53:00.000-08:002007-11-29T15:53:00.000-08:00This essay in my mind is a 3, not a 4, even though...This essay in my mind is a 3, not a 4, even though the GED scorers gave it that perfect grade. Here's why I think the score should be lower. <BR/><BR/>The writer uses the prompt to establish the main idea, but the focus is uneven. He or she spends too much time in the third paragraph talking about the expenses of college before offering a solution.Adam Nathansonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02917401445459447855noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8236074268635113203.post-6337899110588489952007-11-29T08:08:00.000-08:002007-11-29T08:08:00.000-08:00Tiffany,One thing that will help is to eliminate r...Tiffany,<BR/>One thing that will help is to eliminate run-on sentences. Your comment post has a super-long sentence in it that you should cut into several pieces and repost:<BR/><BR/>An I would like to rewrite and write one according to the perfect one tonight for homework and I want you to tell me if they are perfect and if not what improvement are needed so be prepared for those two updates by wednesday but definitely thursday.Adam Nathansonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02917401445459447855noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8236074268635113203.post-28943985277225404992007-11-27T16:11:00.000-08:002007-11-27T16:11:00.000-08:00I am sorry it got erased but I hit the wrong butto...I am sorry it got erased but I hit the wrong button. I appreciate the comments and honest about my writing. An I would like to rewrite and write one according to the perfect one tonight for homework and I want you to tell me if they are perfect and if not what improvement are needed so be prepared for those two updates by wednesday but definitely thursday. Be on the look out for those perfect two essays. They will be perfect score material hopefully, thanks to your encouragement.TAKEN BY DROhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17591178437502493324noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8236074268635113203.post-15350902112261926422007-11-27T16:01:00.000-08:002007-11-27T16:01:00.000-08:00This comment has been removed by the author.TAKEN BY DROhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17591178437502493324noreply@blogger.com